I have recently written this piece with Ben, whom I share similar way in writing poetry, from the concept beginning lines to the last word fine tune. Do check out his blog Benjamin Grossman
I savour your words on my tongue daily
Reading aloud your thoughts and feelings
As if sampling a handcrafted recipe
Words, by their prowess, bring life or death
From yours, I only taste an antidote
Each sentence a mouthful of succulent nourishment
Leafy greens of personification and aromatic spices of diction
Lines of sugar poured over smoldering pages
The flavor of an elite story
Always I crave your expression
Every fibre yearning for your art
Never stop writing
Your every scribble satiates my soul
Great collab. Everything blends and flows as one!
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Thank you Jay! ๐
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You’re welcome!
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I second that.
It really blends and I adored the word choice here.
Regards,
Kim.
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This is an amazing piece with each line flowing seamlessly. This was a great collaboration. I really enjoyed it.
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Thank you Hasan for reading and commenting.
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Really nice job ๐
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