The Six Sentence Story prompt – Station
Grief brought winter rain to the city where his mother lied in peace.
She boarded the train with the intention of giving comforting hugs and perhaps running some errands to help.
To their surprise, she also brought the weather with her. Warm sun broke off the chill hanging in the crisp air.
They both journeyed half life to be in that exact moment when their hearts finally embraced on that railway station platform.
“Life is the train and not the station” – Paulo Coelho
This is a beautiful story.
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Thank you Romi! I am glad you enjoy reading it..
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It was meant to be.
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💚
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“Warm sun broke off the chill hanging in the crisp air.” Visual/textured. Great line!
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Thank you! 🙏☺️
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Beautiful and poetic SSS. Love the quotation too.
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Thanks Pat sincerely!
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lovely story, lovely six
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Thank you!
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I’m with Denise, favorite line: “Warm sun broke off the chill hanging in the crisp air.”
‘though the Coelho line ain’t chopped liver, either.
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A sweet and gentle six. I’ve always like the romantic idea of someone turning up and bringing good weather with them. Excellent quote too.
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Thank you kindly for your comment.
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Beautiful story!
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Thank you Lisa!
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It seems as if some good came from this, despite the sadness of the occasion. Nicely done.
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Thank you!
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