Six Sentence Story prompt – Field
Wherever I saw sunflowers in the day, I thought of you.
You stood facing the sun in full bloom of smile disregarding the harsh light.
The night was a thief who came to steal, rob and abuse.
When the night went on, beyond what you could bear, you let him slit your wrist.
Your passion for life was drained out in crimson rain.
Whenever you came into my dreams at night, I saw you wandering in a field of cherry sunflowers in an anemic gown.
So vivid imagery.
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This is so sad, but very well written.
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Tragic, sad, implications of despair palpable. The first 2 lines, for me, capture the stoic essence of the subject.
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Very sad, and well written.
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Once the sunflower seeds were ready to eat, I knew the summer was over for now🌻
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A strong piece wrapped up in powerful images. Like scenes from a dark horror film.
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I’m with the others, very vivid and, more difficult, you made this an engaging Six.
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Sad, welldone, vivid, real. Great six.
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Sad with such vivid imagery!
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Powerful images – especially the last sentence for me …
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Your Six draws your readers into such a haunting unforgettable scene. Well done.
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A wonderful poem dear Cassa. Amazing use of words. Those wildflower dreams can be sweet or can be deadly.
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Thanks John!
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You are welcome dear Cassa.
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