The Six Sentence Story prompt – Filter
She was as slim as a cigarette.
He longed to be the filter between her divine lips.
Each smoke circle she oozed out blurred his vision and dizzied his mind.
He remembered what his Mama said to him ‘they came to steal your soul son.’
He pressed his hand firmly on her sexy mouth to muffle the screams till her eyes were wide open.
Eventually she was extinguished like a cigarette butt before being tossed to the dumpster.
Very, very dark, but well done.
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Thanks for reading.
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Great stuff my friend. I love this one.
Have a great week. Love ❤️ Joni
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Thank you Joni. Hope your week is filled with light and blessings!
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You to my friend, your stories are really fun to read. Sending lots of hugs and love, Joni
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I am so glad =)
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🤗💕❤️🧚♀️🦋
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I love this one my friend.
Right up my street.
Literally! 😉🖤
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Hmmmmm i wrote more then…..lol
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Absolutely!! 😁🖤
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🤠
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I got here from the challenge prompt. This is a good entry.
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Thank you kindly!
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Using the analogy of a cigarette intensifies this tale of the internal mayhem of a killer’s mind. Dark and frightening Six (which is to say… good job!!)
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Thank you!
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I am very jealous of this story. Good work here.
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😸
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Dude(tte)!*
Well done Six
* compliment on a very effective, drag ’em down right at the end Six
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Thank you Clark!
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Scary, and scary good.
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Thank you!
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Oh my!
Love the use of the cigarette as focus, filter, and phenomenal image!
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Thanks Liz!
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You dragged us right in to this scary SSS right through the smoke and the haze leaving us gasping!
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Thank you Pat! ☺️
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Ooooh WOWZA, well done!!!
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Thank you Jael
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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So well written! I loved the turnaround at the end 🙂
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Thanks Chris for reading and commenting.
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What masterful intrigue!!
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Thanks Lisa ☺️
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