The Six Sentence Story word prompt – Powerful
She caught his sharp lion eyes with her subdued aura, permeating the buzzing party like cool air on a summer night. Her liquid scent weighted down his judgement. He became unsure of himself.
Powerful is her vulnerability, driving him to move mountains for her. The day will come. She will ask him for the impossible and he will gladly obey.
Flicker of Thoughts 
You’ve left me wondering what that could be…
Well expressed! 🙂
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Thank you. I have a few ideas of what the impossible may be, still thinking though…
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What we did for love…
Now the song is in my head.
Well told!
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That’s a good song to be in your head. I have the Simpsons song in my head. 😜
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Concise, and powerful.
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Thanks Romi!
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You’ve done a superb job here, building up a rhythm and tension that crests and holds before we get to find out…what happens next. Wow!!
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Thank you Liz!
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Speaking from the perspective of those of us hailing from Y Chromia (on the distant side of the Mountains of Gender…lol), both an engaging and enticing Six.
(Thanks to Mimi’s comment, I have the 10cc song in my head, “And you’re looking for the answer in her eyes…“)
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I have to look up the 10cc song Clark! Thank you!
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I love the hint of menace in this!
An apt reminder of a great song from Clark, too 🙂
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I have been listening that 10cc song since MM and Clark mentioned it 🤪
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Great six I’m singing now
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😁🎤
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Good one, Cassa. A supercharged Six, all that energy, power and potential!
Ford
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Thank you Ford! I am glad you like it.
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I like your description of vulnerability as being powerful. I think it is if one can get the right person to help which it appears that she has.
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Excellent Six! Love how you captured a pivotal moment in time.
(“…like walkin’ in the rain and the snow when there’s no where to go…”) They made me do it 😆
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😂 now that song is infectious
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Speaking as a mere man, we’ve all been there!
‘She’s the reason I still try
She thinks I could rope the moon’
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I love how lyrics sometimes say all the ‘rediculous’ thing like ‘I could ripe the moon’, so unattainable and yet so perfect for the ones in love. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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