Six Sentence Story word prompt – Deal
Life dealt him a bad hand that no child should have had withstood. A broken soul became a harden man who experienced no pleasure nor pain in the act of violence. Prison life gave him a chance to be a vigilante who did justice for the abused and murdered children.
He thought about the Boss upstairs a lot actually. He thought to himself ‘I am only an eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth. I will make it to heaven. My life isn’t such a bad deal after all.’
Mark ‘Choper’ Read’s final interview: Every Confession
Your story fits well with the video. There is a lot of violence in the world much of which we are unaware of.
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I watched the program last night, and wrote that SSS. I thought it was necessary to show the program to help support the story.
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Your Six is very intense, C. Violence against children is especially heinous.
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Indeed.
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Good six but be careful not to lionise a psychopath wanting ‘redemption’. If you can find it, watch Eric Bana in the movie ‘Chopper’. https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0221073/
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Thank Doug. It’s the movie on my to watch list.
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A powerful and thought-provoking Six, Cassa. I’m afraid I couldn’t bring myself to watch the clip. There is enough in the media here concerning violence against women and children, which is a massive and shameful problem in South Africa.
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Completely understandable Chris.
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Will watch the video.
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Even with all its beauty, the world is not a pretty place . Evil abounds. Good job.
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A rather scary six, well written.
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Read mine too
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He seems like a man with no remorse.
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