I see you better
when I close my eyes
I hear you clearly
in echoes
when I shout out your name
You are near
when we are strangers
Afar
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Flicker of Thoughts 
A very interesting take on relationships. Is it that there is clarity of thought when the person is afar?
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I watched a tv series, the characters clearly love each other, but after 15 years, they were apart. I guess some relationship suffers in the reality of life. Love feeling does not change. But the long suffering of love costs too much. Some couples are better to be apart to keep their individual sanity.
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Six stars! Wonderful!
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Haha I love that extra star 🤓
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Welcome! If any poet deserves it, it’s you.
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Thank you humbly.
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A beautiful paradox. So true too.
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Thanks for understanding the poem.
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It’s always my pleasure.
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