I wrote bit by bit
made up a glimpse of me
in the reflection of someone
on a glassy lake
a smudge of ripple
stole the peace
and I was undisturbed
untouched
understatedly
unnoticed
by despondency
disassociation
disappearance
I wrote bit by bit
made up a glimpse of me
in the reflection of someone
on a glassy lake
a smudge of ripple
stole the peace
and I was undisturbed
untouched
understatedly
unnoticed
by despondency
disassociation
disappearance
Nice alliteration in the end 😎
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Thank you Jay. 😊
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Like the alliteration also. And the part before it all has a such a nice smooth flow. Another awesome one!
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🤗🙏
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Love the imagery in your first five lines!! Very well written and poignant.
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Thank you! 😊
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Nice blog xx
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Really enjoyed this
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Thank you for your comment.
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