Memoirs griffitied on rocks
along the breakwall
recording life events
of locals and visitors
A celebration of a new born
Loneliness of a young man
A girl sad about unrequired love
A declaration of love
A marriage proposal
A strong bond of siblings
An unwavering friendship
Griefing parents burried a child
Loss of a best friend
A widow’s sorrow in a poem
A young man mourns his fellow soidiers
An old man laments his life
They gave these rocks flavours
Besides the salty seawater
In return
The rocks gave them blank pages
For their stories



Well captured stories upon stone…well captured verse of their stories.
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These coloured rocks with their memories and your poem says so much.
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Your poem beautifully captures the essence of human life, with all its joys and sorrows, triumphs and tragedies. The metaphor of the rocks as silent witnesses to these myriad experiences is profoundly moving. Each line tells a story, and each word resonates with emotion. It’s a poignant reminder that our stories and experiences flavor our existence, just as the memoirs graffitied on the rocks add flavor to the salty seawater. Thank you for sharing this touching piece.
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Thank you Kim for stopping by and leaving a comment..I am glad this piece spoke to you.
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What would you add to the rocks?
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🤔 so much I will add and maybe burried in little words..
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Fascinating …
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Tablets of bluestone
Enshrouded by chalk and bone
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Love your poetic response Ivor! 💚
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My pleasure Cassa … your words and photos stirred my imagination 💭
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Shared stories do connect us. Your lines gave this witnessing of stories heightened meaning, Cassa. Beautiful.
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I love this rock wall and your poem!
Blessings to you!
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Hope your year started off with blessings and smiles. 🌻💚
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I like the play of words; between “unrequired love and unrequited love.”
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I often feel the word unrequired is more specific than unrequited because if she is loving him in secret while he is in another committed relationship, then it’s more unrequited than unrequited..I perceive who did the graffiti on the rock didn’t even express her love for him.
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Gifts of nature soothing grief so well written Casa❣️
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Thank you Cindy!
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You are so welcome Casa
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Beautiful, very moving…and poignant! ❤
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