she is
as slim as a cigarette
as slender as a cane
only he
sees her through the smoke
knows her aiding quality
while others
are addicted to her
desire her punishment
Cane
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A very interesting juxtaposition with aiding quality and cigarettes, not to mention addictions and desires. Wonderful!
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I went controversial on it, glad it reached its intent. Thanks for commenting.
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You’re welcome. Thank you for following my blog, too. š
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My pleasure. You have valuable contents. I enjoy reading the posts. š
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I’m blushing. No one every called my posts valuable. I’m humbled. š
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After reading sampling posts, I found them funny, with unique observation and at times colourful, yes that’s valuable. š
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Thank you, Cassa. I enjoy your poetry and your wit. Sometimes I’m a bit intimidated trying to interpret poetry, but I’ll offer up how it strikes me.
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And that’s valuable to me as a writer. Thank you truly for taking the time. I did the same with your music, from an everyday audience’s perspective.
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I appreciate that, too, Cassa. Thank you.
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Excellent juxtaposition of the two metaphors. Very well done!
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I am glad it came through as intended. Thanks for the comment.
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