Six Sentence Story prompt – Zip
We have been close since we shared a seesaw on the playground at kindergarten.
I always remember as teenagers, we lied on the lawn in your backyard to count clouds. You said my head was always in the clouds so I was destined to be a sad poet, and I said you were as dramatic as an unpredictable downpour so you belonged to the stage.
You have been zipped in and out of my life, some times as exciting as a celebrity rash, at times like an annoying mosquito. I hold dear the fun time we shared and forgive you always stole the spotlight.
Today, we are here to celebrate a life lived fully and a soul brighter than sunshine.
This is really good, especially because it was short but so full of life! Amazing job! 😊
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Thank you kindly.
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Dang, I meant to rate you a thumbs up but I accidentally hit the thumbs down 😢
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Hahaha I take it either way!!!!
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Wow! ❣️
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Thank you! Happy New Year.
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You’re welcome! Happy New Year to you!
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A beautiful and positive eulogy.
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Life itself is really worth celebrating ☺️
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Such a great part: “You said my head was always in the clouds so I was destined to be a sad poet, and I said you were as dramatic as an unpredictable downpour so you belonged to the stage. ” Feels like the start of novel to me.
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Thank you Ben! A novel about 2 best friends, yay I can see that. 👍😃
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Welcome. Yeah, that’s what I was thinking. Would make a great movie too or tv show.
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Wonderful piece 🥰🌹🤗
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Thank you G! Have a blessed Tuesday!
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My pleasure. You too sweetheart 🤗
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Beautiful eulogy, but friends forever!
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The best friendships both challenge and delight. we should all be as lucky as the eulogist! ❤
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Indeed.
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Well done, I agree! I wondered if it was true…it’s sad.
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Thanks for reading Jael. It’s fictional if that helps..
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I’m glad to hear that 🙂
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😊
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Lovely Six. I like how their characteristics are related to the weather conditions, and how it ends on the word ‘sunshine’. Also, you can’t appreciate enough a line like: ‘annoying mosquito’ until you have been bitten by them more times than you remember! Ouch. Scratch. Scratch. 🙂
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I don’t like mosquitos, they are just the most annoying thing, for me personally. 😃
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Same here. I spent most my life in a cold country = no mosquitoes. Now I am in hotter climes they are a pure menace to me. 🙂
The Dalai Lama said: “If you think you are too small to make a difference, try sleeping with a mosquito.”
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What a great quote. The small is mighty.
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Oh wow. Just oh wow. great six.
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Thank you!
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Tender and precious. Lovely.
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Thank you so.much for reaching!
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Engaging Six!
Especially liked the line, “…as exciting as a celebrity rash”
well done
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Thank you Clark!
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This made me think of my bestie of 50 plus years. Beautiful story.
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I wrote it with one of my best friends in mind. Best friends are hard to come by. 50 plus years is indeed like a rare gem.
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You managed to encapsulate the essence of a friendship. In only 6 sentences. Nice.
Very visual. And the closing line sentiment is superb!
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Thank you humbly.
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