Blue Moon was written in response to Jeff’s poem Orange Sky which was included in his poetry collection Nature Speaks of Love and Sorrow.
Orange Sky by Jeff Flesch
orange is the color of the sky
and the image I find you in the night
dancing before my mind
althought I’m tired and weary
still I find in you delight
considering all the things you’ve done
like showing me how to become a man
while learning to let go of all my shame – complacency
drops instead
letting love burn through the atmosphere inside my heart and head
Blue Moon by Cassa Bassa
tonight the moon is blue
hung high over the ocean tide
murmuring love tunes
to stir up the calm water
within me
this blue flame
licking my already burning skin
reminds me of the orange sky
we lay under
the texture of your shyness
the layers of my wanting
peeling off the first blooms
of our love
and eternal desire
It’s a beautiful one, Cassa. Your words read like music. 🙂
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🎹🎻🎷😀
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Beautifully done 💖
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What’s good sis?! Been too long since I have been here. Still loving the work you produce though! Hope all is well in your corner of the world. Blessings!
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Hey Josh! All is well this side of the world. Blessings to you and your household 🙏💚
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Thank you; and to yours!
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What phenomenal, alive writing! I love the divergence between the two poems. ❤
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☺️💚
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A beautiful poem. Thank you again for collaborating with me, Cassa. 💜
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It’s a real pleasure.
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It’s gorgeous, Cassa.
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Thank you Rob, I am glad you liked it.
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Gorgeous poem Cassa.
xoxo
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Hi Cassa,
I loved reading both poems back to back.
Beautiful work!
Blessings!
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Thanks Ana! Glad you liked them.
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So lovely and you paint such a picture for us as well. Just beautiful as is Jeff’s piece. Nicely done you two. Love and hugs, Joni
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Thanks Joni! So glad you liked them.
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Wow! Excellent, excellent, excellent! Lots of great lines you have here. That’s very interesting: “the texture of your shyness”.
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I think the texture of shyness feels velvet like a rosebud.
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It’s an interesting idea: that emotions have textures to them. Well done!
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😊
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