Hello Autumn

Yesterday was the hottest day in summer

Like a lover fighting for their relationship

Refusing to breakup

Today is the first day of autumn

Inevitably, unapologetically

Leaving behind the passionate, hot and steamy season

Author: Cassa Bassa

🇦🇺🇨🇳 inquisitive, observant, witty, a thinker, was a misfit child 😊 View all posts by Cassa Bassa

Joe says:

Mar 1, 2024 at 9:41 am

Very evocative last line!

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1. Cassa Bassa says:
  
  Mar 1, 2024 at 5:10 pm
  
  Thanks Joe for stopping by and commenting.
  
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sircharlesthepoet says:

Mar 1, 2024 at 10:21 am

Wow, I’ve felt both of these seasons! The last line took me aback!

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1. Cassa Bassa says:
  
  Mar 1, 2024 at 5:11 pm
  
  Thanks Charles for stopping by and commenting.
  
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  1. sircharlesthepoet says:
    
    Mar 5, 2024 at 9:33 am
    
    of course!
    
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Carol anne says:

Mar 2, 2024 at 7:44 pm

wow! Awesome poem! Hello spring, as its spring where I live!

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ben Alexander says:

Mar 5, 2024 at 6:37 pm

It’s so evocative how you capture the transition from summer to autumn with such vivid imagery!

~David

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1. Cassa Bassa says:
  
  Mar 5, 2024 at 8:52 pm
  
  Thanks David!
  
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Susi Bocks says:

Mar 12, 2024 at 8:50 am

Great comparisons! Well done, Carrie!

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1. Cassa Bassa says:
  
  Mar 12, 2024 at 5:38 pm
  
  Thanks Susi! 🤠
  
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  1. Susi Bocks says:
    
    Mar 13, 2024 at 2:24 am
    
    You’re welcome!
    
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