The six sentence story prompt – Rivalry
There was a King. His power was no rivalry on earth and in heavens. He became friends with an ordinary man named Abram so He blessed Abram and his descendants.
Now Abram is long passed but his descendants are fighting in Gaza. In the midst of the crossfire, the oppressed lift up their voices to cry out ‘YHWH! Allah!’ The King has compassion to Abram’s sons and daughters and He weeps.
That rivalry has gone on for thousands of years. I like how you brought the two sides together in this story even while they are at war.
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Thank you Frank!
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So beautifully done, my friend!!! I love that ending, powerfully written 🖤🤗🙌🏻
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It is a sad situation, so much suffering. But you have brought forth some beauty and compassion with your words. ❤
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Thank Liz.
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This story makes me cry.
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When I watched the news, I almost felt the pain and desolation of the people lost their love ones and with their lives under thteat.
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A dream. To imagine those in power to possess compassion sufficient to motivate and inspire the search to find solutions for all.
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So amazingly written. The ending is especially powerful…strong writing, my friend!!! 🖤🤗
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Thanks Ace!
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There is hope
There is compassion
There is love
There in the hearts of all that be
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A very strong and well written six. No resolution until the end of time
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One day this battle will hopefully end nice writing my friend. Love you Cassa. ❤️🤗🦋
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I hope so too. 💚💕💞
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Bless you sweetie. Have a great day. Love you Joni ❤️🤗🦋🦋
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Sad but time will end this misery. Wonderful writing.
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Such a tragic situation. Great Six though, Cassa!
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Thanks!
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It is all too easy to imagine that the true original sin was to see religion as having a value that was so critical to life that any other form of the same thing was a threat.
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Someday there will be peace on earth again, but until then the battles continue to rage.
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I clutch the hope tight.
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Beautifully told, and yes, God, by whatever name, must surely weep to see what we have become.
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💚🤍💚
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It’s true what you said and there is truly a clash of believes but if they decide to fight then it should at least be equal … Quite a beautiful piece dear~💕💖
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Beautifully done, Cassa. It seems the curse of humanity that we have to endlessly kill, despite the millions of voices calling always for peace.
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Well told. It is my hope that peace will come. I have never understood the power over the powerless.
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Good write, however the struggle is over land and occupation, religion is to confuse people. And, how convenient, its not as easy to solve that.
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If we treat each other as family, than there should be enough land and resources to be living in peace by sharing. In reality, it is divisive. Thank you for the thoughtful comment Jay.
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You would think, ideally. Sadly, the powerfully funded think otherwise
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