This is written as a Six Sentence Story based on Denise’s word prompt- Express
It was close to midnight. We decided to drive to the beach to experience the ocean under the moonlight.
We swam far and deep out of the ocean, exhilarated, shrieking with excitement between waves. The waves built bigger and stronger tossing us to a dangerous new high.
Then came the indigo storm, running towards us like an express train, forcing us to swim for our life. When it hit the shore in such great force, we were spat out like wreckage, exhausted and intertwined, looking like a cluster of seaweeds.
Flicker of Thoughts 
That indigo storm is another good reason for me not to swim far out in the ocean. Nice description: “spat out like wreckage”.
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It’s very dangerous to be swimming out when there is no life guards. The ocean is very changeable.
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Splendid piece Cassa.
xoxo
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Welcome to 2022 Gabriela! Abundant blessings to you! 🍾🥂💕
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Thank you so much sweetheart. May 2022 bring you happiness and success.
xoxoxo…
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Wonderful story, Cassa. Loved it. ✨🌹🌻
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Thanks Jeff! 😊
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You’re most welcome. Always! ☺️
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Quite a terrifying one. The ocean has a mind of its own. 🙂
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Yes she is moody
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She’s quite a powerful tempest.
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She is, isn’t she?
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Cool: “indigo storm”!
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Your last line is a masterpiece.
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Thank you Reena for your kind comment.
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You are consistently brilliant. Good job
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Thank you humbly.
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I enjoyed your vivid descriptions of the scenes.
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Thanks Rommi!
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A blessing that it spat you in the right direction!
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I’m still tasting salt 😀 Visual, tactile and interactive Six C.
P.S. Won’t catch me in the ocean at night. Jaws left a big impression on me, lol
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Haha glad that you have been warned by the toothy friends.
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You won’t catch me in the waves after dark. Excitement almost turned to tragedy… so beautifully expressed!
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It could have been a lot worse. A wonderfully descriptive piece, well done.
Here’s my 6!
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Thanks Keith!
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Exhilarating, cool, and just a little bit dangerous! ❤
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