when love pushed us under water
my fight-or-flight kicked in
I broke off your hand and fled
watching you drown
living doesn’t feel alive
right now
Danger Response
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Flicker of Thoughts 
Beautifully written my friend š¤ š¤
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Thank you so much! š¤
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You’re most welcome š¤
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Owwww~ when you can’t chose btw yourself and the ppl you love~ more painful than it sounds~š¢ lovely one dear~ š
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Thank you Yiena, you are sweet! I am thankful for you.
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Ow~ that’s one heartwarming reply! š Thank you so much~š„°
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So beautiful. I feel pain in the words. I was affected. You write too good. Salute!
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I am glad it touched you. Thank you for reading.
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It touched my soul. Thank you!!! š
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Love this! So many emotions attached to it!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful metaphor for describing the pain of watching another suffer. We can’t always love the people who love us romantically and time is too short to pretend. Joni
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Thank you Joni for your kind comment.
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My pleasure. I love your honesty in your bio. I got quite a laugh as it is so refreshing to hear the truth. Too often we say what we think we are suppose to say instead of potentially offending. However no one has time to read hundreds or even thousands of other peoples work. Have an amazing week. Love ā¤ļø Joni
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Thank you Joni. I have also scanned your bio too. I will love to read it line by line and look at the previous posts too. Blessings!
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Blessings to you my new friend as well. I look forward to reading more of your poetry and short pieces. Love ā¤ļø J
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