The Living Poetry Valentine’s Day prompt – Love
When love is lost, hate is an equal strong emotion to replace love, at least for a period of time in stages of the grieving process.
The willow is wilted by the west wind
A mouse is playing the piano off keys
Spider web covers the couch you once claimed
My vocal cord is rusted by regret
Two mockingbirds are serenading on the sycamore tree
If only I took your advice and bought the bb gun
Great imagery! Especially the “vocal cords rusted by regret” and the final couplet. Thanks for writing to my prompt.
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Thank you Bartholomew! π
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I love the humor here Cassa! So great!! Blessings!
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Glad you like it Ana! π
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Brilliant. You understand so well.
It’s s exactly how I’ve been feeling today – bitterness towards those who are still enjoying what I have lost.
Great work my friend π€π€π€
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I will send you some fruit and veg instaed of flowers then. π«πππ₯π₯¦π₯πΆπ
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That’ll do me nicely π
Thank you my friend π€π€
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This is great Cassa. β€οΈπ€π¦ Hope your week is going great. Big hugs!!!
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You too Joni!
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I liked the bb gun at the end and the thought of the mouse running over the piano keys trying to be a quiet as possible.
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haha I took inspirtion from the cartoon Tom and Jerry.
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Great, funny twist at the end.
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Thanks JeanMarie!
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Wow. The ending is awesome! Haha. Loved it. π
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Thank you π
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I love the dark humor π
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Thanks R! Charmer rubs off on me…π
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