Six Sentence Story word prompt – Canvas
I am an amateur artist finger painting on the canvas of our pure love.
Frantically smear every excitement all over a seemingly life long foundation, I am over charged with passion.
Halfway, I realise that there are patches heavily loaded with enthusiasm.
The balance is destroyed.
Giving my best effort to salvage it, I only manage to make it dark and dull.
Now the beauty is ruined, and I quit trying.
Flicker of Thoughts 
I like how you described the initial enthusiasm, then realized the balance was destroyed, then tried to fix it, but failed and gave up. May we call on the Lord at that point.
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Divine intervention needed indeed.
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You’ve explained it so creatively. That’s exactly how love begins, stumbles, and ends. 🙂
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I sincerely hope that this is not the norm for love. I Long for the splash of wonders on a canvas of pure love and happily mostly after. 😃
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Perhaps it is not the canvas but the medium! Water color instead of oil? Pastel instead of charcoal? 🙂 Besides, isn’t beauty in the eye of the beholder?! Love the free style of this piece, C.
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Art is fun and unpredictable 🤓
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*sigh* the muddy mess of an overworked painting! I know many an artist who’d identify with your Six!
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*Sigh* too
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Love this poem!! Very emotional and inspiring. Especially, loved your first two sentences!!
Awesome! 😊💕🌹
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Thanks Charles! Hope you are doing well.
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share great posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you have a great day!! 😘💕🎁🌹
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