walking on the pale sandy beach
spotting treasures in the sparkling sun
enough to whisk away the pensive mind
submerging in such shimmer
daydreaming the clouds to be
a motion picture of happy memories
until the edge of a rock or
a broke shell
cutting underneath her foot
the clouds turn into a violent swirl
brown bleeding out into the muted sand
from a place of torment
empty drink bottles
a monster broken capillary face
wild eyes flaming
savage shaking of a slim form
empty promises
an innocent blood drained cheeks
fearful stare vacating
prey falling off an arrow
how many times those cuts
drove her to the dark shadow
ignoring the brightly shining sun
gossamer waves reflecting off the water
old blood fading away into the saline foam
like the broken shells
in mock dismay
wow. just wow. perfect execution.
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Thanks for the feedback. There is such a story behind this, I am glad this piece does the story justice then.
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look forward to reading it
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em….story writing is a bit difficult for me…maybe one day..
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