bird and wings
fish and water
life and breath
lock and key
together
they make sense
me over here
you over there
meaningless

bird and wings
fish and water
life and breath
lock and key
together
they make sense
me over here
you over there
meaningless
Powerful!
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Thanks ๐
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Lovely write.
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This is so good. 11 out of 10 kind of poem. The brevity, the thinking, the feeling. This is the kind of poem I always want to write. Thanks for sharing this one. Your writerly mind is so beautiful!
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Thank you Ben, i am humbled by your comment. ๐โบ๏ธ
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It’s really good. I can’t say it enough. I almost thought to unlike it so I could like it a second time. They need a double like button for moments like this. Have a great rest of your week!
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hmm… problems?
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Just border closure sucks.
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Yes. ๐ฆ
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Wow this is really really good. Love it. Beautiful style!! Yes, a good pair, a perfect pair, now I see it. ๐๐
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