You brought me sunrise
When darkness covered my mind
Morning dew diluted last night’s tears
My lashes tasted sweet upon your lips
You tendered me with a crown of frangipanis
Within the distance of our breaths
A butterfly fluttered frantically
twining around the invisible bloom between us
Flicker of Thoughts 
Goodness, the sweet sensations and vivid imagery you’ve painted here are gorgeous. I could see everything perfectly. Bravo!
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Thank you so much and I am glad it did that to your senses.
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It sure did. Thank you so much for those wonderful sensations.
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The imagery in this poem is so immersive, and I love how it is delicate and thoughtful yet strong and affirmative at the same time! ❤
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Thanks Jaya! ☺️
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Beautiful, Cassa!! I love this.
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Thank you and that means a lot.
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As Tara said, beautiful and very enjoyable to read. Lovely writing Cassa
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Thanks Tom! I appreciate you.
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There’s a touching delicacy to this Cassa. It warms the heart to read
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I am glad it has that effect. It’s close to my heart too.
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This is fantastic, and the ending couplet is a great ending point!
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Thanks Ben!
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Welcome!!
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Beautifully written especially those last four lines. Just so many lovely tender moments. ❤️🦋🤗🥰Joni
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