Girlie On The Edge Six Sentence Story prompt – Visa
It’s been five whole years since they last talked.
The pandemic lockdown broke them apart, and the need for companion snuffled the remanence of love.
Living with stage four cancer turned her world upside-down, priority of life, things that truly matter and making amends were all she could think of in every waking moment.
She stocked up in medicications, purchased a plane ticket, got a visa approval, and said goodbye to her loved ones, in case she doesn’t make it back home after the trip.
The same driver way, the same door, the same smell of the garden, and the same bird songs, all these were so familiar, but it’s a gamble, she wasn’t really sure if he still lives there, and it felt like centuries have passed before she worked up the courage to knock at the door.
The door opened and a young woman was looking at her, then called out her name, ‘Dad took his own life two months ago, we are here to tidy up his house for sale, would you like to come in?’
Goodness, that’s a well-told and intense read. The ending was an unexpected twist, and unfortunately life can work out in those ways sometimes.
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Let’s hope tragedies only happen in fictions.
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Agreed.
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Powerful. Good reading. Happy New Year!
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I am glad she at least attempted to make amends.
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The irony of life. A beautiful piece on loss and courage. 🙂
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Wow that is a sad and cautionary twist. Whatever it is, do it now–it’s the only time we’re guaranteed.
–Shay
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Thanks Shay for reading and commenting. Appreciated!
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Time. We often take it for granted, putting off (fill in the many blanks) until sometimes, like your MC discover, it’s too late.
Loved your reading of the story, C as your voice carried the tone and timbre of your words.
Well done.
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Thank you Denise. I enjoy very much to write to your prompts. I probably will read some of my work out loud when I feel it’s a piece of emotional work. I am totally inspired by others to test the reading word.
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I’m so happy to read you at the Six again an look forward to future readings. You have a lovely voice. It beautifully augmented your story.
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Sometimes there’s no happy ever after, and it hurts. Well told.
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Sadly it’s part of the reality of life.
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Tragic tale, Cassa, and so well-told.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, I appreciate it.
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A well told tale warning that sometimes it is too late.
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So well told!
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Happy 2023 Chris! Hope you are well.
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Happy New Year! Reading and writing are there just beginning again!
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Good to know. Look forward to reading you again.
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Every thing but one, still there, still familiar. Sad.
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A hard lesson to learn – don’t hesitate with what needs to be said. Listen to our voice within…
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Good advise Margaret. Thanks for reading.
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A solemn write my friend, and told so beautifully too.
I hope we get to hear more of your lovely reading voice 👍🖤
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😊🖤
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Sad story of a relationship that wasn’t meant to go farther than it did. 💔
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