
We’ve been waiting for
a good day to take the boats out
We’ve been spending our time in waiting for the right moment to have fun
We know it’s silly
But our family thrive on regrets
We’ve been waiting for
a good day to take the boats out
We’ve been spending our time in waiting for the right moment to have fun
We know it’s silly
But our family thrive on regrets
I love the way the final stanza changes the meaning of this poem! ❤
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Ooooo, the perfect twist with so much meaning. I’m poetically jealous!
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So clever!! Blessings!
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Beautiful! Twisting! Well shared🙏
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Thank you Priti for stopping by.
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My pleasure.☺️do visit my blog 😁
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That’s excellently conveyed, Cassa.
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Deep message, excellently delivered.
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Fantastically weaved. The last line and the title…wow.
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Simply put, but so profound, Carrie! ❤
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Thanks Susi!
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