Hornet’s surprise

He made her cry
like an orange peel
stung her eyes

He made her numb
like a tangy grapefruit
bittered her tongue

He made her smile
like a ripen orangelo
surprised her lips
with a swell of affection

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Rivera says:

Dec 4, 2019 at 11:17 pm

Bitter-Sweet poem.. Nicely done ✅
🙂

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1. Cassa Bassa says:
  
  Dec 4, 2019 at 11:40 pm
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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  1. Rivera says:
    
    Dec 4, 2019 at 11:42 pm
    
    🙂
    
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The V Pub says:

Dec 5, 2019 at 12:56 am

The ups and downs of a lovers relationship. Well done, Cassa!

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Antony H. says:

Dec 5, 2019 at 1:08 am

Great imagery! ☺️

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short-prose-fiction says:

Dec 5, 2019 at 5:51 am

Beautiful construction, my dear. Great use of antithesis: cry/smile. I really enjoyed reading this poem.

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1. Cassa Bassa says:
  
  Dec 5, 2019 at 5:52 am
  
  Your comment brought me a smile. 🤗
  
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  1. short-prose-fiction says:
    
    Dec 5, 2019 at 5:53 am
    
    I am so glad. Please keep smiling 🙂
    
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