He made her cry
like an orange peel
stung her eyes
He made her numb
like a tangy grapefruit
bittered her tongue
He made her smile
like a ripen orangelo
surprised her lips
with a swell of affection
He made her cry
like an orange peel
stung her eyes
He made her numb
like a tangy grapefruit
bittered her tongue
He made her smile
like a ripen orangelo
surprised her lips
with a swell of affection
Bitter-Sweet poem.. Nicely done ✅
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Thank you so much!
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The ups and downs of a lovers relationship. Well done, Cassa!
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Great imagery! ☺️
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Beautiful construction, my dear. Great use of antithesis: cry/smile. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
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Your comment brought me a smile. 🤗
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I am so glad. Please keep smiling 🙂
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