The Six Sentence Story – Twist
1 year of sweet sugar romance
1 day at a time dilution of love
1 bit of sour taste of lemon
1 lot of sweeten venom
2 to 3 years of cold hostility
1 final twist of bitter bile
Writer’s note: The real Lemonade recipe is as below
- 1 cup white, granulated sugar
- 1 cup water
- 1 cup lemon juice
- 2 to 3 cups cold water
- 1 twist of fresh lemon
Flicker of Thoughts 
Oh, yikes!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Such a twist to the prompt!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very creative approach to the prompt! But sad. Hopefully, there’s room for a fizzy, fruity, carbonated recipe next 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
Surely ☺️🤗
LikeLike
This is an interesting approach to describing a deteriorating love. I liked it! Though I’d much rather be served up the second recipe!
LikeLiked by 2 people
I love the real lemonade! 🤗
LikeLiked by 2 people
Hahaha! Nice but also bitter 😆
LikeLiked by 2 people
😂
LikeLiked by 2 people
It sounds like there needs to be a time to heal.
Clever approach to the prompt!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Pat!
LikeLike
Another masterpiece by you!
LikeLike
Thank you Ben humbly!
LikeLike
Welcome.
LikeLike
I like the format of a story as a six line recipe.
LikeLiked by 2 people
That’s a creative take on the prompt!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow, wow, wow, I will never make lemonade the same way again. What a great TWIST on the cue. This is really gripping and thought provoking.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks ☺️
LikeLike
Kitchen disasters and relationships are so alike, you start with good intentions, then…
Loved it. A fine and well-crafted 6 there!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you TVTA =)
LikeLiked by 1 person
😎
LikeLike
I do believe that I’ve had that drink before.
LikeLiked by 1 person
So did I 😂
LikeLiked by 1 person