She told him lies about consequences.
His lips were sewn up by shame.
The world became more suffocating
than her body odour.
He was convinced that he needed to be a rat to survive the filth.
Victim

She told him lies about consequences.
His lips were sewn up by shame.
The world became more suffocating
than her body odour.
He was convinced that he needed to be a rat to survive the filth.
“The world became more suffocating
than her body odour” : It is a strong, powerful sentence. I really like your text.
thank you
John
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Thank you for stopping by and commenting John!
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You are welcome Cassa Bassa.
Take care
John
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This bears the stench of submissive depravity.
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I like your sharp comment!
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Words that convey their point bluntly are always beautiful. 🙂
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I agreed!
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Short and sharp
A rat in the harp ..
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Thank you for the comment Ivor!
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Love the honest look at perpetrators and survivors in the context of gender/sex!
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Yes such crime does not discriminate..
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