Today
The first autumn leaves fell
They remind me
of the warm sun
no more
Because
I scattered your ashes
on the last day of summer
Autumn Doesn’t Feel The Same
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I always get a bit sad to see summer end, and ours is soon to beginโฆ
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I usually love Autumn for its colours. We are at the end of autumn now and heading into winter soon.
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Lovely Cassa, enjoy the changing weatherโฆ
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As Autumn leaves fell
Ashes do silently dwell
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I love how the tone of this changes – the opening four lines full of hope and beauty, and then the crash of a harsh reality. Excellent.
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As soon as I read this I thought of the current Kdrama Bo Ra! Deborah where she reflects on the movie 500 Days of Summer (the last day of Summer transitioning to the first day of Autumn) ๐
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Now I need to check out Bo Ra.
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I think you might like it, Cassa ๐
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It’s a romantic plot. Wow you are a romantic at heart!
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I guess I am at that๐
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Aww, thatโs so sad, and beautiful. Lovely poem, Cassa.
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Thanks Jeff! It’s sad but it’s good to write it out.
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Beautiful work. One of your greatest. But this in your collection!
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*Put it in your collection of poems in the future!
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Yes Sir!
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