When we leave a love one, I feel we always bring/leave part of us with the other person. When we leave love, we are bound to be empty for a while I guess.
Absolutely beautiful and rare gem of poetic art… love the layout, the minimalism, the subtle repetition, the haunting theme. Read it several times over to let it sink in; itās pretty deep on multiple levels. The image seems perfect too. I stand in awe! šš
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That opening was simple but very powerful! “He left himself with her in that city”
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When we leave a love one, I feel we always bring/leave part of us with the other person. When we leave love, we are bound to be empty for a while I guess.
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Yeah, you’re so right. We’re always part-empty after that.
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amazing work!
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Absolutely beautiful and rare gem of poetic art… love the layout, the minimalism, the subtle repetition, the haunting theme. Read it several times over to let it sink in; itās pretty deep on multiple levels. The image seems perfect too. I stand in awe! šš
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Your comment said everything I wanted to say perfectly~ šššø
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Thank you for the kind words Yiena šš· it is a great poem š
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I am humbled by your comment Lia. š
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Very sincerely meant every word. šš
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The previous commeny said it all~ Really lovely piece Cassa~ šššø
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Cassa, deeply dark and emotive… youāve taken us into the realm of love lost and youāve done so brilliantly!
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Thank you Lance for your comment.
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It is a great pleasure, Cassa!
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